Rainbow Snippets – 20.02.16


Where does the time go! Snippets are here again. Find all of them on the Facebook page. I’m cheating a bit today, a little more than six sentences, but I didn’t want to slice up this exchange. From the current WIP x


“Thank you.”

Caleb shrugged and pulled his hat on. Jacob was having none of it though. “I mean it. Thank you for letting me stay. You know you don’t have to.”

Caleb paused as he stepped down into the street, his boots crunching on the frozen mud. “There’s some bad weather coming. Turning you out in it wouldn’t do either of us any good. I’d only worry that you’d be back…stealing my chickens.”

Jacob cracked a smile. “I would never steal chickens from you. Your horse, sure, but never chickens.”

14 Responses to Rainbow Snippets – 20.02.16
  1. Ana J. Phoenix Reply

    Heh. Jacob sounds fun.

    • Alex

      Alex Reply

      : ) He’s a bit naughty. I’m hoping he offsets Caleb’s grumpy self a little x

  2. Heloise West Reply

    Nice! 🙂

    • Alex

      Alex Reply

      Thank you : ) x

  3. Alexa Milne Reply

    Great snippet. Jacob sounds like fun.

    • Alex

      Alex Reply

      Thank you : ) I hope so! It’s always hard to tell if you’re getting it right, so I’m keeping my fingers crossed that he’s fun x

  4. JL Merrow Reply

    Great snippet! 🙂

  5. JL Merrow Reply

    I love the gruff affection here. 🙂

  6. Jana Denardo Reply

    Ahaha I really like Jacob here. Bet he has his work cut out for him here.

  7. Louise Lyons Reply

    Jacob’s fun and I sense grudging affection from Caleb

  8. P.T. Wyant Reply

    They’re going to be a fun couple.

  9. Elin Reply

    Stealing a horse but not a chicken? Big appetite then 😀

    Very nice interaction.

  10. Amy Rae Durreson Reply

    Love the interaction between them here, both of them backing off from the emotion a little to make jokes.

  11. Cheryl Reply

    Lovely snippet

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