Rainbow Snippets – 26.12.15


Festive Snippet Time!! Six more sentences from Stumble Forward. Don’t forget to check out all the other snippets from the other contributing authors on the Facebook page


“I wish they had told me you were coming.”

“Do…do you want me to go? I just thought–”

Jason laughed and reached out to slap at Alec’s arm. “No, stupid! It’s just…I would have showered.”

They sat on the only bit of furniture in the tiny room, a small single bed that matched the pastel blue and cream décor. Whoever had designed it had done their best not to make it feel too much like a hospital, and the whole place didn’t have the feel of anything medical, but sitting there in Jason’s room, all Alec could think was, prison, and it wasn’t just because of the wire mesh on the window.

6 Responses to Rainbow Snippets – 26.12.15
  1. Charley Descoteaux Reply

    Wow, so much going on here. I’m intrigued, and love “I would’ve showered.” 🙂

  2. Heloise West Reply

    well done!

  3. Jana Denardo Reply

    Now I want to know why Jason’s in a hospital. well done

  4. Chris Quinton Reply

    Intriguing – and it hooked me. More, please 🙂

  5. Clare London Reply

    There’s a suspenseful tension between them that’s intriguing 🙂

  6. P.T. Wyant Reply

    That last line has me really intrigued.

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