Rainbow Snippet – 12.03.16

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Rainbow Snippet time! If you’re new to Rainbow Snippets, it’s a Facebook group where LGBTQ authors post a six-sentence snippet of a WIP, a published story, or a recommendation, every weekend. You can see all the snippets here.

My contribution was my WIP from last week, now a free read in the links above. Or clickety here. Whatever.

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“How much for the night?”

The question takes Drew by surprise. He shakes his head. “You can’t be serious?”

Adrian pulls out his wallet, takes out a bundle of cash and puts it on the coffee table. It’s so high it spills down like a landslide. “How much for the night?”

17 Responses to Rainbow Snippet – 12.03.16
  1. P.T. Wyant Reply

    I loved this story! I still want to know what the last line of it really means, though…

    Go read it, people!

    • Alex

      Alex Reply

      Thank you, Hun. You may get to find out soon! Maybe ; ) x

  2. Addison Albright Reply

    Great snip from a fantastic story. Loved it!!!!

    • Alex

      Alex Reply

      Thank you! x

  3. Cheryl Reply

    I LOVE the book cover. It’s imaginative and really draws you in.
    The snippet is intriguing.

    • Alex

      Alex Reply

      Thank you! I really like that idea of them both traveling in the dark…or something : )

      Thank you for reading x

  4. Louise Lyons Reply

    Intriguing snippet. I like the sound of the book.

    • Alex

      Alex Reply

      Thank you. It’s in the “Short Stories” drop down tab, if you fancy a read : ) x

  5. AM Leibowitz Reply

    I agree, that cover is terrific. This sounds like a terrific read.

    • Alex

      Alex Reply

      Thank you! My procrastinating paid off (I should have been editing : ) There’s a link to the story in the post, if you fancy it x

  6. JL Merrow Reply

    Great story! (I totally clicketied *g*)
    Sad, though, and I can see how it might be a challenge to make it longer without either getting depressing, or diluting it. I think it stands well on its own.

    • Alex

      Alex Reply

      Thank you for the clickety! : ) I think I may have found a way to do it that could have a happy ending at least. I’ll see how it goes x

  7. Charley Descoteaux Reply

    Wow, great short!

    • Alex

      Alex Reply

      Thank you! I’m so happy you liked…if that’s the right word x

  8. Heloise West Reply

    Beautiful cover, intriguing snippet!

  9. Jana Denardo Reply

    That makes me curious

  10. Dianne Hartsock Reply

    Oh wow, he’s not kidding! 🙂

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