Festive Snippet Time!! Six more sentences from Stumble Forward. Don’t forget to check out all the other snippets from the other contributing authors on the Facebook page
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“I wish they had told me you were coming.”
“Do…do you want me to go? I just thought–”
Jason laughed and reached out to slap at Alec’s arm. “No, stupid! It’s just…I would have showered.”
They sat on the only bit of furniture in the tiny room, a small single bed that matched the pastel blue and cream décor. Whoever had designed it had done their best not to make it feel too much like a hospital, and the whole place didn’t have the feel of anything medical, but sitting there in Jason’s room, all Alec could think was, prison, and it wasn’t just because of the wire mesh on the window.
Wow, so much going on here. I’m intrigued, and love “I would’ve showered.” 🙂
well done!
Now I want to know why Jason’s in a hospital. well done
Intriguing – and it hooked me. More, please 🙂
There’s a suspenseful tension between them that’s intriguing 🙂
That last line has me really intrigued.