Rainbow Snippets – 19.12.15

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Snippet time! A little more from Stumble Forward. You can read more snippets from some great authors over on the Facebook page.

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It wasn’t so much a kiss as Jack smashing his mouth hard onto Alec’s. It was all teeth in flesh and desperation and their eyes locking, staring at each other in pain and surprise as it happened but Alec didn’t try and pull away, even when he felt Jack’s vice-like grip release.

Jack slowly drew back, his face pulled tight in the horror of what he’d done. Alec stood frozen, his eyebrows raised and eyes wide with surprise. He wanted to speak but wasn’t sure how he could even begin to address what had just happened. He could see blood smeared on Jack’s bottom lip and suspected it was his own.

16 Responses to Rainbow Snippets – 19.12.15
  1. Louise Lyons Reply

    Wow, hot and rough! I wonder what they’ll say to each other. I’m interested to read more.

    • Alex

      Alex Reply

      Thank you for your comment! This is the point of no return for them so it’s either going to go great or really bad…or maybe a bit of both…I wouldn’t want to give it away : ) x

  2. Charley Descoteaux Reply

    Very sexy! I hope we get to see more next week!

    • Alex

      Alex Reply

      Thank you for commenting : ) I’m a sucker for awkward passionate moments. I’m glad you like x

  3. Elin Reply

    Oops. This could go one of several ways 🙂

    • Alex

      Alex Reply

      It was such fun to write though! I should feel bad for putting my boys through all this awkward stuff…I totally should : ) Thank you for your comment x

  4. Chris Quinton Reply

    🙂 What happens next, hm?

    • Alex

      Alex Reply

      Oh, you wouldn’t want me to spoil it for you, would you? : ) Thank you for your comment x

  5. JL Merrow Reply

    Tense moment! 😀

    • Alex

      Alex Reply

      Thank you! I do like writing the tense, awkward moments so I’m glad it comes across okay : ) x

  6. P.T. Wyant Reply

    Hey, no fair to leave us hanging! I can’t wait to see the fallout from this.

    • Alex

      Alex Reply

      Mwahahaha….I mean, so sorry about that, it only six sentences allowed! : ) This was, and still is, one of my favorite scenes. Especially the fallout : ) Thank you for reading and commenting x

  7. A E Ryecart Reply

    Totally with you on awkward moments – like to read and write them. Good job!

    • Alex

      Alex Reply

      Thank you for the comment! And yup, they are really fun to write xx

  8. Dianne Hartsock Reply

    Oh wow! How is this going to play out? *winks* More kissing? 🙂

    • Alex

      Alex Reply

      Thank you for your lovely comment. Well, I don’t want to give anything away but…: ) xx

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